Pen Point's Poetry Erotic


DaLovePoet and CC




Sweet and Total Surrender



Your lips sought mine, and our mouths joined
In a savage, hungry kiss that drew
Us in so deeply that we all but drowned
As our bodies melded in the morning dew.

Surrendering completely to the feelings;
Locked helplessly in love's embrace;
Quivering within tumultuous explosions;
Our very cores enflamed like a fireplace.

We were whirling wildly through the universe;
Our bodies nearly mad from wanton desire;
Joined together gyrating in a dance of love;
Each intense stroke prolonged and drove us higher;

Enflaming our molten sensations,
We were powerless to resist
That which was so new to us both,
As we burst in white-hot splendor, and kissed.

Our explosions continued like a raging storm;
A storm that rocked and shook the seas
Of our very foundations of our beings,
As you exploded continuously with me.


Mike Diaz and Carol Cathey

© 2001 DaLovePoet and CC (All rights reserved)
04/02/01